This addresses nothing I said and comes across incredibly childish. I am not even sure what point you are trying to make other than a bad one.
I do think the over analyzing of one shift of a 5 man breakdown to search for any minute detail to blame slaf incredibly toxic and very representative of a portion of this fan base's attitude towards him this entire pre-season.
Slaf looks better than last year. This is clear as day. With young prospects, this is what you want to see, progression. Stagnation and regression are red flags, but I don't see it here.
He's clearly better than any other forward prospect this entire camp, and the other players better than him this camp have been Dach, Suzuki, Caufield and Monahan. I would argue that him, Newhook, and Anderson have all had similar showings this camp. This is only positive.
If you are going to evaluate him every shift and puck touch, you will find issues. This is the case for any player. On the whole, I see a player who has improved a lot of from last year and is clearly able to able to play in the nhl. Whether he's ready to be a top 6 producer as of game 1 is still an open question, but I like what I see so far.