I think it's better than last year's, TBH, and somewhat balanced. Of course, it relies a bit on bounce-back performances from Gallagher and Drouin for the Dvorak line, but that's not impossible in the least, IMO.
The D is a different matter. If, somehow, Montreal could get Shattenkirk, who has become the third pairing RHD after ANA just signed Klingberg, it would settle that D-Corps down into a better seating arrangement on the depth chart.
Shattenkirk would also provide a special teams veteran for the PP and the PK.
Matheson - Shattenkirk
Edmundson - Barron
Harris - Savard
Without being close to elite, this D-Corps it would at least be serviceable for the Habs and would have puck-movement on all pairings, with a veteran to mentor a youngster throughout.
Anderson - Suzuki - Caufield
Drouin - Dvorak - Gallagher
Slafkovsky - Dach - Dadonov
Hoffman/Pitlick - Evans - Armia/Pitlick
Pitlick, Hoffman, Armia
Matheson - Shattenkirk
Edmundson - Barron
Harris - Savard
Price?
Allen
Montembeault
Unfortunately, I think that this lineup would not be in the running for America's next top model, Connor Bedard.