The Fifth Season and The Obelisk Gate N.K. Jemisin
Contemporary fantasy is dominated by white, male, cisgendered septuagenarians writing the same basic plot over and over and over and- McDermott is a 30th percentile bell curve schmuck living a life not worth living, and doing nothing under his own power to change that, until one day God downloads superpowers into his skull and suddenly, through no ability or effort or for any real justification, he becomes McDermott, the Chosen One, destined to defeat the Sacred Order of D-Bags who have taken over the kingdom/want to destroy the world, or whatever.
Dibs on McDermott vs. The Sacred Order of D-Bags
So I wanted to like this series, because it was decidedly *NOT* that. It's about an emotional wreck of a woman who, despite being a mage of great power (power as in, she can move pulverize boulders and freeze people with a thought) is hampered by her significant mental distress from a life of emotional trauma and constant abuse. She's caught up in events she doesn't understand and can't control, she doesn't want to save the world or stop the Dark Lord from gaining the 8th Xan'far Seal, she just wants to survive and locate her daughter.
But there are too many issues to ignore. Regarding the A-plot, there're about as much narrative movement in the first 30 pages as there are in the next ~400 pages (book 1 is carried entirely by one character in the B-plot, who, coincidentally, is reduced to an exposition machine in book 2, of the "I'll lose consciousness before I can explain the vaguely worded advice/info dump" variety). In those 30 pages, the emotional conflict of the main character manifests as repression of the horrific thing she just discovered, lest she lose control and kill everyone in town, or worse, out herself as a mage. The scene builds, piling on the tension until she can't take it anymore and explodes! But this dynamic is never used again: instead, we see this pattern: "[insert horrible, mildly interesting thing completely unconnected to the narrative or the main characters goals/desires]--> main character [internally]: 'oh. My. F**K.' " Then they solve it and move on. Many of the setup/payoffs are botched, because none of the characters involved are built up or fleshed out. One of the most important scenes in the 2nd book involves a fight between a character with two lines previous (and this qualifies him as a major character, mind), and a character the book doesn't even bother to name; a second, equally important scene soon after involves two characters with one line each, who are introduced for the first time in the previous scene! Many of the emotional beats don't make sense. For example, the main character's goal in book 1 is to find her daughter. But in book 2, we learn she doesn't really like her daughter, having viewed her as a burden and risk for getting caught for the last 7 years/all of her daughter's life.
Anyway, the writing was pretty good, save she favors that staccato style that modern writers seem to love. The 1st book is carried by the B-plot, the 2nd book isn't, so the 2nd is "worse" when really it was just the 1st book saved by a great B-plot- because it involves only two characters who well fleshed out, and the narrative moves swiftly, and it doesn't get bogged down in info dumps via combining information about the world with tense or sad scenes. In retrospect, it's sad- the problems which dominate the A-plot disappear in the lesser plots.
Not interested in the 3rd of the trilogy.