Small nit pick, but why have Giroux, a righty, on the left, and Norris, a lefty, on the right?
I'm not sure Ostapchuk is ready for 3rd line center duties, I like that as a long term projection, but I'd be hesitant to pencil him in there. I could see penciling him in as a guy that will earn that spot by Jan, but we need to have a backup plan (might be Norris, but then who plays top 6 wing)
I also would like to see us as some grit and vet presence, preferably a penalty killer.
To me, this is a lower priority, RHD is obviously the top need, I think a 3rd pair upgrade comes next, then that gritty vet up front.
Oh, and obviously, a goalie is priority numero uno, but realistically, we may have a hard time getting out of what we have...