I loved it, too. M.R. is one beautiful woman.Watched I Tonya tonight. Very good film, although I enjoyed the second half more than the first. Margot Robbie and Allison Janney were excellent. Man, Tonya Harding had a tough life. Her mother was horrible to her.
8/10
When you posted your "review methodology", I almost went full beserk because there's really no need for such formulaic approach to art (you perfectly described 95% of film comments you find in major mags, mostly written by people who have nothing to say about cinema). Here, you've got ideas. You don't need no synopsis (please! that's just filler) or appreciation to make a relevant comment on film, you just need one coherent idea and from there you can write a thesis.
I loved it, too. M.R. is one beautiful woman.
Okay, that's fine for you. But the problem with formulas, one of many, is what do you do when you see a movie and your response doesn't fit the preconceived formula? Formulas tend to lock the writer in to a way of thinking that can be inherently self-limiting. Basically a reviewer is or should be in service to the movie and how one approaches writing about that movie requires flexibility. It would drive me crazy to put the formula before my thoughts; my writing would not benefit from such a cookie-cutter approach. I think each writer has to find what is best for him/her, and that may take time and be frustrating, but the effort usually pays off in the long run.We seem to have different approaches to reviews. I, personally, don't think that they should be theses or necessarily have something to say about cinema or put forth "ideas." I think that that's better saved for analysis and discussion, which is why I left what you just responded to out of my review. I think that a review should primarily be informative and broad and help the reader decide if he/she might want to watch the film. I like to keep my reviews focused on that and practical. To that end, a synopsis helps because some people, including me, like to know a little bit about the plot when deciding whether to watch a film. To me, it's essential, not "filler." A review that doesn't give the reader any indication what a film is about fails on a fundamental level, IMO. Anyways, I'm not trying to judge films as "art" or push my own ideas, but evaluate them as entertainment and help people decide if they're worth their time to watch. To that end, a formulaic method makes it easier for me. I'm more science inclined than art inclined, so that's probably why. I wasn't saying that "this is how you write a review." I was just sharing the method that's comfortable for me in case it might help the person who found it harder.
Okay, that's fine for you. But the problem with formulas, one of many, is what do you do when you see a movie and your response doesn't fit the preconceived formula? Formulas tend to lock the writer in to a way of thinking that can be inherently self-limiting. Basically a reviewer is or should be in service to the movie and how one approaches writing about that movie requires flexibility. It would drive me crazy to put the formula before my thoughts; my writing would not benefit from such a cookie-cutter approach. I think each writer has to find what is best for him/her, and that may take time and be frustrating, but the effort usually pays off in the long run.
I think that you're both taking the template that I gave too seriously and not recognizing that I offered it as a suggestion to get started if anyone doesn't know where to start.
I really didn't want this to make you feel attacked or anything!! What I said is that I ALMOST reacted to your initial post (because I think it's problematic in two ways: 1) it's a formulaic approach that values opinions over ideas and 2) it invites someone who has nothing to say to still feel the need to say it anyway) - but I didn't. I only mentionned that to underline that I was on the contrary happy with your last comments on Knives Out, because they put ideas over form, formula or opinions. That's all. Never wanted to criticize the overall value of your comments - wouldn't be fair, I evaluate the number of times I made valuable/valid comments on films here at about 5 or 6. Otherwise, I mostly just enjoy sharing my "tastes" with others, who are a lot more knowledgeable than what you'd expect from a hockey board.
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You're looking at the end product of our work which might sometimes appear similar in form. But it is a question of how we got there. My way of getting there approaches writing more as a process than as a product. What's that mean in practical terms?I don't feel that having an introduction (including a synopsis), a list of likes, a list of dislikes and then a conclusion is self-limiting. Your reviews seem to follow pretty much the same "formula." Your synopses tend to be quite a bit longer than mine, but, other that that, I don't think that there's a whole lot of difference between how you and I write our reviews, when you break them down. You allow for flexibility, but so do I. I don't stick to my template all of the time. In fact, in my most recent review, I didn't even include two steps because I didn't feel like it. I jumped directly from my synopsis to what I disliked about the film. Other times, I don't bother with a synopsis (such as if I'm reviewing a blockbuster that no one needs one for) or, when I love a movie, I might not bother with my dislikes because they're so minor that it feels like nitpicking. A few times, I've abandoned my template almost entirely. I think that you're both taking it too seriously and not recognizing that I offered it as a suggestion to get started if anyone doesn't know where to start. Naturally, as a person gets more comfortable, he can get creative and develop his own style.
I legit LOL'd at this kicker.
Always nice to hear feedback.Me, too.
You're looking at the end product of our work which might sometimes appear similar in form. But it is a question of how we got there. My way of getting there approaches writing more as a process than as a product. What's that mean in practical terms?
My suggestion would be to never see the first draft as a final draft. Do not try to make the first draft perfect. Write with the intention that you will have to revise what you initially compose, often more than once. That's because writing is a process of discovery. Ideas take time (and thought) to emerge. Take the pressure off the first draft and write to explore potential ideas and figure out what you have to say, not to polish those early thoughts up immediately or necessarily to even keep them--just let your thoughts flow in the first draft and don't sweat mechanics or grammar or spelling. Then take a break and come back and see what raw material you have provided yourself in that first draft. Don't try to fix that draft. Keeping a skeptical reader in mind, create a second draft that builds on what you have learned about what you wish to say. Has a theme emerged that you can develop or maybe a central conclusion about what you really think about the work? If so, re-organize your thoughts, radically if necessary, to bring your imagined reader to accept the validity of the central conclusion that you have come up with. Create a skeptical reader in your mind when you are composing second drafts and beyond--let him or her help you decide what comes next in the second or later draft--what does he or she need to know next to understand your argument? Your goal is to persuade that imaginary reader of the validity of your conclusion, not that it's the only possible conclusion that exists.
I think such a process-oriented approach is more likely to lead to interesting writing.
Persuasive conclusions can be used for qualified positions--it's not a question of throwing the good stuff away or ignoring the contradictory bits but of discovering these ideas in the first place and then finding effective ways to communicate some of them to your reader. Certainly in a review, unlike, say, most argumentative essays, a thesis (conclusion) isn't required and the process doesn't have to be as elaborate, but thinking about a conclusion that you have come to about a work (or a non-conclusioon for that matter, which can be equally interesting) can help organize your thoughts. A lot of different roads lead to Roma.On the contrary, I think aiming at a persuasive conclusion is counter-productive. Ideas should prevail over arguments and opinions. I can draw my own understanding of a work, and that understanding can feed on incomplete or unattached ideas you'd throw my way.
Same for me, I liked it a lot. Probably the best in-theatre experience I've had in a few years.Man, all of the Knives Out hate is bumming me out. One of my favourites of 2019.
Persuasive conclusions can be used for qualified positions--it's not a question of throwing the good stuff away or ignoring the contradictory bits but of discovering these ideas in the first place and then finding effective ways to communicate some of them to your reader. Certainly in a review, unlike, say, most argumentative essays, a thesis (conclusion) isn't required and the process doesn't have to be as elaborate, but thinking about a conclusion that you have come to about a work (or a non-conclusioon for that matter, which can be equally interesting) can help organize your thoughts. A lot of different roads lead to Roma.
Man, all of the Knives Out hate is bumming me out. One of my favourites of 2019.
Couldn't agree more. Only I would say one's ultimate goal should be to figure what, if anything, you have to say that is worth another person's time to read. Starting with an articulated proposal gets the ball rolling, a definite good start, a way of kicking off a writer's voyage of discovery. The proposal may be a good starting point, but it is the investigation and the conclusions, if any, you have come to through exploring your proposal, that most people will be curious about. I would never suggest coming to a conclusion of any kind at the start of the writing process. Conclusions, if they arrive, usually come at the end of a thinking process, not at its beginning (or, in your case, at the end of the investigation of your proposal, assuming, as I do, that you keep an open, skeptical mind about the initial proposal throughout your explorations). When people start with conclusions at the beginning, they get locked into positions that they feel they can't abandon, or even qualify--and that can be anathema to good writing.Oh of course, a perfect rounded text would propose to organize these ideas into a coherent whole. I was just reacting to the "Your goal is ..... persuasive conclusion" part of your post. The first goal of a review shouldn't be that IMO, but only to propose something, anything. After that, if you want to build this up to great length, only the better.
You're looking at the end product of our work which might sometimes appear similar in form. But it is a question of how we got there. My way of getting there approaches writing more as a process than as a product. What's that mean in practical terms?
My suggestion would be to never see the first draft as a final draft. Do not try to make the first draft perfect. Write with the intention that you will have to revise what you initially compose, often more than once. That's because writing is a process of discovery. Ideas take time (and thought) to emerge. Take the pressure off the first draft and write to explore potential ideas and figure out what you have to say, not to polish those early thoughts up immediately or necessarily to even keep them--just let your thoughts flow in the first draft and don't sweat mechanics or grammar or spelling. Then take a break and come back and see what raw material you have provided yourself in that first draft. Don't try to fix that draft. Keeping a skeptical reader in mind, create a second draft that builds on what you have learned about what you wish to say. Has a theme emerged that you can develop or maybe a central conclusion about what you really think about the work? If so, re-organize your thoughts, radically if necessary, to bring your imagined reader to accept the validity of the central conclusion that you have come up with. Create a skeptical reader in your mind when you are composing second drafts and beyond--let him or her help you decide what comes next in the second or later draft--what does he or she need to know next to understand your argument? Your goal is to persuade that imaginary reader of the validity of your conclusion, not that it's the only possible conclusion that exists.
I think such a process-oriented approach is more likely to lead to interesting writing.
Sure, though, of course, persuasive point making helps you to do that.That's exactly how I approach making an argument, which I do a lot, so I don't disagree with that in the least. I just don't approach reviews that way because my goal with them is not really to make a persuasive argument, but to give readers enough information to decide if they want to watch the movie and judge it for themselves.