It's a harsh indictment, but not inaccurate.
Case in point, rambling about Josh Archibald baptizing his baby in the Stanley Cup while a breakaway is developing ( :10)...
Not to mention the cringe hype-up of Crosby's goal and inane chatter on the 3-1 goal.
You nailed it.
Its the development of the play thats all too often missing from his call. The buildup of the play is important as well. It adds to the play overall and to the viewer staying invested in the game and all the little plays that really matter. Its like having the scoring highlights and only focussing on the goal and not on the play that preceeded it.
Jack fails miserably far too often in that regard.
That call 10 seconds in is a perfect example.
Why not tell that story in between whistles? Is that story sooo important that it should be prioritized over the play that sets up the breakaway?
The answer is obviously NO.
The 3-3 goal is even worse...Jack is so engaged in story time that he doesnt even call the goal until after its in the net.
Absolute garbage play calling.