What about this
Lafreniere + Schneider for Byram + Peterka + 2nd
Panarin for Zegras + Mintyukov + 2nd ‘25 + 2nd ‘26
Kreider + Jones for Crouse ($1m retained) + 2nd ‘25 + 2nd ‘26
Cuylle-Miller-Zibanejad
Zegras-Trochek-Peterka
Crouse-Parsinnen-Berard/Othmann
Edstrom-Carrick-Rempe
Byram-Fox
Miller-Borgen
Mintyukov-Soucy
Vaak
In a vacuum (eg Byram not requesting a trade), I'd like to see the Buffalo deal Laff + Schneider for Power and Peterka (while dropping the 2nd).
I think in your proposals, the D is very good so long as they have the right structure/D coach. Left side goes from a weakness to a strength and I'm a big believer of building from the net out, which you are doing here. You also have several players who can play center aside from those listed there currently (Zib, Edstrom, Zegras)
Biggest questionmarks are that 3rd line (Crouse struggled big time last season though could rebound, Parssinen was good in his short stint before getting hurt and in the WC, does that continue and will one of Othmann/Berard step up and show they can produce on the 3rd line at the NHL level) and will there be enough offense after trading Panarin?
Zib would need to return to form as well as Zegras getting back to that 20+g/60+ point player.