I agree with most of this, on the goal, rebounds are going to happen, the shot hit him in the shoulder, it's a very hard to control rebound there, and he didn't have much time to clear it though he tried, the real culprit there was the dump in, or Kleven failing to tie up Hagel.
The PP did score, and actually looked good once they were set up, execution on the entry was the issue, not the coaching imo,
To the bad, I'd add our slow start defensively, we were letting them hit our zone with speed and skate by guys for chances in the 1st, we eventually adjusted, so that's a pro I guess, but it could have been ugly early.