This looks really good for the most part. Here's the changes I would make:
BOS: Minten makes team (BOS goes 14F).
BUF: Zac Jones to AHL (2 way contract).
CBJ: Fasching to AHL (2 way contract).
DET: No clue who the 13th F is. Doubt its Mazur coming off injury.
NYI: Gatcomb and MacLean make team, Engvall to AHL. Varlamov starts on IR.
NYR: Perreault makes team, Othmann to AHL.
OTT: I've seen nothing that says Jensen is definitely out to start the year. Even if he is, Yakemchuk is almost certainly going to the AHL.
PHI: 3 goalies make team including Fedotov. Gilbert, Bump to AHL. Ristolainen may be healthy.
PIT: McGroarty makes team (team wouldn't include him in social media posts if he wasn't here to stay).
TBL: Geekie makes team.
TOR: Myers as 7D instead of Thrun (more cap savings).
WSH: Miroshnichenko to AHL. McIlrath stays as 8th D.
CHI: Levshunov makes team, Allan to AHL.
EDM: David Tomasek makes team as extra F.
LAK: Burroughs makes team as 8th D, Andre Lee to AHL.
MIN: Yurov makes team.
NSH: Stastney makes team instead of Englund. Kemell to AHL. I'd leave the last forward blank because i'm almost certain they will sign someone.
SJS: Ostapchuk to AHL. Misa on team once he officially signs his ELC.
SEA: Fleury, Hayden to AHL.
UTA: 3 goalies on roster. Vanecek, DeSimone make team. Yamamoto, Lamoureux to AHL. Valimaki will be sent to AHL if healthy.
VAN: Willander makes team. Kravtsov to AHL (2 way contract).
VGK: Holtz is an extra F if he resigns.