An amount of time ago I read and posted about a book called On the Face of the Waters by Flora Annie Steel, from 18... something or other. Chiefly concerning the Indian rebellion of 1857, I noted with some sadness the fact that a book centred around such a turbulent, interesting time of history (which was entirely new to me at the time) was let down by its scale and the sprawling nature of its characters, its narrative and its approach to time in terms of how the events are described in relation to each other. I finished by preaching caution when reading a book which doesn't have a Wikipedia page, especially if it's as long as that one was.
This weekend the 526 page long Philip Hensher novel The Mulberry Empire spent its time pummelling my brain and, well, what do we have? We have a large, partly fictionalised account of the first Anglo-Afghan war of the 1830s. Unlike Flashman it deals fairly equally with both sides. Certainly the lack of Flashman's comic elements helps make both sides appear more sympathetic. The actual domestic politics of the time are presented in a relatively interesting manner which helps at least make the book seem... fairer. Showing the folly of the two competing powers, Britain and Russia, is more effective when you get the views of every side and a better understanding of what they're doing and why they're doing it. Crucially, the Afghans see no difference between the English and the Russians, which is fitting since near enough every imperialist power in a place like this throughout history has shown the necessary regard for native social structures. Certainly the English desire to install a puppet king who will do what they tell them is indicative of this, and the fact that this book was published in 2002 probably added a sense of prescience at the time given what was happening then in the region, 160 years later.
Since I finished this I've been looking at reviews of it. All from broadsheet newspapers, several speak in glowing terms of the literary pastiche Hensher uses, parodying genres, writers, everything. Here's the thing. It's pish. This does not read like the book of a smart, well-read man combining over a century of literature into one in a way which is self-reflective and intelligent. This reads like the work of a man with an over-inflated sense of his own profundity. Most telling in this regard are the last few pages in which a sentence running "and here the story ends" (or similar) recurs three or four times. There's a section where one man who's left his sweetheart in England to go back to the east writes a ~10 page letter to her from the boat about... everything. He then finishes it by saying 'oh no, I can't send you this, I'm going to throw it into the furnace, please write me Bella.' That really boiled my ****. Naw, I'm not having this. Of course, one of those reviews says it's evoking Conrad. Leaving my own opinions of him aside, no it isn't. It just isn't. The worst case of this sort of pretentiousness is the Anthropological Interlude which, yes, is written in that font, of someone else in the same place years later, looking at things. Included for no reason I can see besides showing off how much Hensher knows about this time period, it just typifies how badly he's trying to show off how much he knows. And how badly he's trying to do it.
The other problem which comes from a book which is written by someone who isn't as good at writing as he thinks he is, aside from the descriptions, and the commas, of which there are many in many sentences, for each part of a person or a thing which is being, as they say, described, is, again, the scale. It's big. And there's a lot of people in it. Who do a lot of things. I realise I'm bad at reading, I don't have a memory. Yet if I had managed to read this in one go (which would have left me less coherent than I am now, just let that sink in) I still wouldn't have a clue what was going on. People do things, then the book moves to new people in a new place and goes back hundreds of pages later, by the time they've changed and by the time which has passed (which is never detailed) you've no idea who they are. And, more importantly, you have very little reason to care.
I think the most telling thing about the characters in this book is that the most interesting one is a Russian who appears about 2/3 of the way through, is there for 50 pages and disappears in disgrace, never to be seen again. If he was going for historical accuracy in this case (why this case was so important I don't know, since he admits in his acknowledgements at the end that one real character's described homosexual relationship with a boy was complete fantasy) it just typifies how the book is the work of someone who cared very passionately and was very interested in the subject but had no idea how to write an engaging novel about it.
Nothing I can say here other than criticising the scale and the characterisation will do this book justice. I think the subject matter is let down by the style and ability of the man writing about it.