2019 World Juniors: Canada Dominant on Day 1

[Larry Fisher]

Canada was expected to blow out Denmark in their Boxing Day opener and the hosts didn't disappoint, while the Czech Republic escaped with an overtime win against Switzerland to start the 2019 World Junior Championship. My recap of Day 1: https://thehockeywriters.com/2019-world-juniors-day-1-recap/

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[Just Linda]

Canada was expected to blow out Denmark in their Boxing Day opener and the hosts didn't disappoint, while the Czech Republic escaped with an overtime win against Switzerland to start the 2019 World Junior Championship. My recap of Day 1: https://thehockeywriters.com/2019-world-juniors-day-1-recap/

I don't usually say this and I don't mean to be rude but I found that very hard to read due to each paragraph seeming to be a run on sentence. Perhaps simplifying your work and less commas would help.

 

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I don't usually say this and I don't mean to be rude but I found that very hard to read due to each paragraph seeming to be a run on sentence. Perhaps simplifying your work and less commas would help.

Did we read the same story?

Nothing wrong with the article.